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"Whatsoever things are true, whatsoever things are honest, whatsoever things are just, whatsoever things are pure, whatsoever things are lovely, whatsoever things are of good report; if there be any virtue, and if there be any praise, think on these things."
~ Philippians 4:8 ~

People often ask me if I'm any relation to the Bronte sisters, (as in Charlotte, Emily, and Anne). Upon retrospect, I should have expected that when I first took up the pen name Judith Bronte in 1997!

As a longtime fan of
Charlotte Bronte, Jane Eyre was, and still is, a great inspiration to me. The dialogue between Mr. Rochester and Jane is much too small, but what's there, is golden! In my opinion, Jane Eyre has the best lines ever written (outside of the Bible) between a man and a woman. If you've read any of my stories, then you already know how much I enjoy portraying the interaction between the two leading personalities. How often have I scanned books, looking for the quote marks that signaled more dialogue. Enough comments on the color of the shrubberies, please! Hurry up and get to "the good stuff"!

Another great influence in my writing has been Jane Austen. Can anyone read Pride and Prejudice too many times? I don't think so. Jane Austen's Persuasion is also a particular favorite of mine, and I've always admired the fact that as her last novel, she was only getting better as a writer! Something to aspire to!

I first began writing some short stories and poetry when I was twenty-one, but still hadn't quite found my true calling. (You can find much of it at
Acacia Vignettes, which also happens to be my first website.)

In 1998, after I had just finished reading a mediocre novel, I wondered if I could write a better story. But what to write? I've often heard it said, "Write what you know." (Very limiting advice, if I do say so myself.) In the end, I compromised with Izumi Mizukio, the heroine of my first romance novel. Having a German, French, Irish, and Japanese background, I related to Izumi's multicultural family, and easily fell into the rhythm of the story.

I remember telling my mom that I wasn't going to publish Journey of the Heart on the Internet, but when it was finished, she encouraged me to put it out there and see what happened. I did, and not much happened. Very few read the story, mainly because I was still new to the Internet, and it takes time to get a website established. But I didn't know this. What I did know, however, was that I had finally found the creative outlet that I had been searching for, whether anyone was actually reading my stories or not.

After months of trying to find "the perfect plot" for my next endeavor, I finally decided to just sit down and write. Some Pass By was my second love story, and was soon followed by The Harvest of Christopher Cushing.

At the beginning of 2000, I was at a creative crossroad. I asked myself if I could do anything, what would it be? I immediately knew the answer: to write a full length novel. It was then that I started The Greatest of These. As always, I kept the plot a secret from everyone, even my mom, who up until she passed away, had been my absolute biggest fan. I would give her each chapter after its completion, and she would sit at my computer and say, "Oh, look! The scroll bar is already halfway down! Couldn't you write longer chapters?!" Then she would try to tease future plot out of me. I miss that. The time we spent together reading my stories, are moments that I will carry with me for the rest of my life. I'm really looking forward to meeting her in heaven, and asking her opinion of what I've written since.

In 2004, I began writing Abigail's Journey. Since it has received more attention from readers than the previous stories, I hope it means that I'm growing as a writer. The book was finished in July of 2006, and was my first, completed, full-length novel.

I finished The Greatest of These in June of 2007, after putting it on hold to finish Abigail's Journey.

I'm currently working on Mountain Wild, my first historical romance. My dream is to write professionally for a publisher, while still writing free love stories for this website. I owe all my readers an immense debt of gratitude for their encouragement as I find my legs as an Inspirational Romance writer. Whenever someone takes the time to try my love stories, it's an amazing act of trust on their part-- especially when they allow the characters into their heart.


Here are some questions I'm frequently (and not so frequently) asked:


Q: Who are you? How old are you? Are you married?


Q: If you're not married, how can you write the way you do? The relationships in your stories feel so real.


Q: John from Dar es Salaam, Tanzania, wondered if my stories had any relation to my own personal life experiences.


Q: If you freely share your real name on this website, then why do you use a pen name?


Q: While I like your stories, Journey of the Heart, Some Pass By, and even the first part of Greatest of These, don't seem to be as well written as Abigail's Journey. Why is that?


Q: How long have you been a Christian?


Q: When did you first fall in love with the written word?


Q: What inspired you to write Christian Romance?


Q: Why is the story you're currently writing not downloadable like your others?


Q: I submitted feedback about one of your finished novels, but my comments were never added to the website. Why?


Q: I've gone to my bookstore, but can't find any of your books? Is it possible for me to get a hard copy of them?


Q: How long will Mountain Wild be?


Q: Have you already written the stories, or are you just posting one chapter a month to string us along? I'm dying to know what happens next! (No one has actually said this, but it's often implied! <grin>)


Q: Will you ever stop writing for free at this website?


Q: Do you base the characters in your stories on real people?


Q: How do you come up with your story ideas?


Q: After Mountain Wild is finished, what other stories do you have in mind? Will you be writing another story about Abigail and Jake's life?


Q: Can you give me any pointers or advice on how to become a writer?


Q: How do you write your dialogue? It's like it's real!


Q: I love Jake from Abigail's Journey, and think it's great the way God sent Abby to help him. Because of this, I'm thinking about becoming penpals with someone behind bars. Should I?


Q: Is it possible for you to write any faster?


Q: I just received a response to my feedback from someone named Sam. Who is he, and why is he answering your email?


Q: What version of the Bible do you use for your Scripture verses?


Q: Question from a reader. Warning, contains one or two plot spoliers to Abigail's Journey!





Q: Who are you? How old are you? Are you married?

A: Judith Bronte is the pen name of Sarah Fall. I'm thirty-one years old and I've never been married. I live in Southern California, (USA), with my father and two brothers. I work in the family business as a website and graphic designer, and spend my spare time writing. back to top


Q: If you're not married, how can you write the way you do? The relationships in your stories feel so real.

A: Before my Mom passed away, she and I had many discussions about Bible based relationships. I learned a lot from my parents-- not only by listening to what they said, but also by watching their Christian example. Little did they know, that it would one day come in handy for a career in writing Inspirational Romance! back to top


Q: John from Dar es Salaam, Tanzania, wondered if my stories had any relation to my own personal life experiences.

A: I've always joked that if I stuck to subject matter that I've actually lived, my stories would be pretty short! That's why I usually do so much research for my writing. Even though I sometimes draw inspiration from my personal life, it's just elements-- and not entire story plots. For instance, I've never experienced the things that Jake Murphy from Abigail's Journey did; I've never known the pain that comes from physical or emotional abuse. Abby, on the other hand, came from a family that I can very much relate to. In fact, of all the characters I've written, I'd say that Abby probably comes the closest to my own personality. But I'm not Abby, and these stories are not autobiographical. They're just the products of an overactive imagination, and the need to share it with others. back to top


Q: If you freely share your real name on this website, then why do you use a pen name?

A: When I took up the pen name Judith Bronte back in 1997, it was mostly out of privacy. I didn't want to give out too much personal information on the Internet, but I also wanted the anonymity that a pen name afforded. Writers pour their soul into their words, and I'm no different. A pen name gave me a little more courage to put myself out there and just write what I felt God led me to. When I later decided to pursue a career in Inspirational Romance, I made the decision to publish my real name on this website. back to top


Q: While I like your stories, Journey of the Heart, Some Pass By, and even the first part of Greatest of These, don't seem to be as well written as Abigail's Journey. Why is that?

A: Journey of the Heart was written over eight years ago, and was my first love story. With the exception of a manuscript that I'm working on for future publication, this website has every single romance I've ever written. From my first foray into penning a short novel (Journey of the Heart), to trying my hand at something longer (Greatest of These), all my past mistakes are here for everyone to see. While I currently make greater efforts to polish the chapters and stories that I publish, the thought of going back and rewriting my old stories is a little daunting. I have so many projects going on, that I'd rather use my time writing new material. back to top


Q: How long have you been a Christian?

A: I was raised in a Christian family, so I don't actually remember the first time I professed Christ. Mom told me that as soon as I was old enough to know that Christ had died for my sins, I was claiming Him as my Savior. back to top


Q: When did you first fall in love with the written word?

A: As a child, I remember watching my father read. Dad loved the written word, and he still does. I would play with his collection of books on the floor, thumbing through pages, looking at the infrequent pictures, and wondering what those horizontal tracks of mysterious characters could possibly mean. Then, one day, when I saw my Dad having an especially good time with a book, I made up my mind: I was going to learn how to read. As I became older, I started reading authors such as Laura Ingalls Wilder and L. M. Montgomery. Wilder taught me how to tell a story, while Montgomery taught me the importance of character development. Then I discovered the world of Jane Austen, and fell in love with her dialogues. Just when I thought it couldn't possibly get any better, I read Charlotte Bronte's Jane Eyre. Charlotte taught me passion, and I've never been the same since. After all this, I read a few lines from John Bunyan's The Pilgrim's Progress and my own journey truly began. See below for more on this... back to top


Q: What inspired you to write Christian Romance?

A: Until I started putting my own stories on the Internet, I didn't even know an Inspirational Romance genre existed. I only knew that I wanted to write a love story, and since I was Christian, it only followed that it would be from a Christian perspective. I suppose my biggest motivation to start writing, was to harness my overactive imagination and use it for something good. I credit the idea from John Bunyan, who in his apology for The Pilgrim's Progress wrote, "In this my scribble... to divert myself, in doing this, From worser thoughts, which make me do amiss." I thought, "If writing stories worked for him, then maybe it could work for me." Thankfully, it has. Writing is a way for my overactive imagination to stay out of trouble, and to think only thoughts that God wants me to think. The great authors I had read before helped to open this door, and God has been holding it open for me ever since. back to top


Q: Why is the story you're currently writing not downloadable like your others?

A: Only completed stories are available in PDF's. As soon as the novel is finished, I'll make it into a PDF as well. back to top


Q: I submitted feedback about one of your finished novels, but my comments were never added to the website. Why?

A: I've made the decision to stop posting new comments for stories that are already finished. After I complete a novel, everyone will have one or two additional months to comment, but then no further feedback will be posted about that story. back to top


Q: I've gone to my bookstore, but can't find any of your books? Is it possible for me to get a hard copy of them?

A: Thanks for looking! For now, the only way to buy a hard copy of my novels is through the Internet. Currently, Abigail's Journey and The Greatest of These are available in paperback from Lulu.com. In the future, I'll also paperback my other completed stories (Journey of the Heart, Some Pass By, and The Harvest of Christopher Cushing).


Q: How long will Mountain Wild be?

A: I'm planning Mountain Wild to be about as long as Abigail's Journey (30 chapters), and like Abigail, I'd like to put it in paperback after it's finished. back to top


Q: Have you already written the stories, or are you just posting one chapter a month to string us along? I'm dying to know what happens next! (No one has actually said this, but it's often implied! <grin>)

A: Sorry, but I'm truly writing each chapter on a monthly basis. back to top


Q: Will you ever stop writing for free at this website?

A: God willing, I will continue writing for this website as always. I've been extremely blessed by this experience, and plan to continue for as long as I can. back to top


Q: Do you base the characters in your stories on real people?

A: No, I don't. back to top


Q: How do you come up with your story ideas?

A: That's a hard one. Sometimes, I get the emotion first, and then the characters follow. Sometimes, snippets of dialogue come to me, and then I have to break it apart to understand why I liked it so much. The bottom line is that I have to be intrigued by the story line to follow up on it. I love trying to find out what makes a relationship work, and how people gravitate to each other. And then there's the everyday struggles that each Christian must face in life, and how they deal with their difficulties and problems. I don't care what anyone says-- the good guys are MUCH more interesting than the bad guys! back to top


Q: After Mountain Wild is finished, what other stories do you have in mind? Will you be writing another story about Abigail and Jake's life? WARNING: if you haven't read Abigail's Journey, this might spoil a surprise!

A: I'm plotting two more romances for the Journey series, to be written for the website sometime AFTER Mountain Wild is finished. One of the sequels will be Terry's love story, while the other will be about Jake's son, Ricky. Though Abby and Jake will be in the two sequels, they will not be the primary focus in either one. They've already had their book, and I'm eager for Terry and Ricky to have their own journeys! Eventually, I'm hoping to bring all four Journey books to paperback, so my readers can set the entire series on their bookshelf!

In addition to all this writing and planning, I'm working on another love story. This one, however, won't be a free read like my other books. When the manuscript is finished, I'll consider my options and see what publishing avenues are available. (And no, this isn't one of the Journey sequels. :-)

As always, I intend to continue writing free romances for this website, so I hope you'll drop by for the next chapter!
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Q: Can you give me any pointers or advice on how to become a writer?

A: I'm not a great one for advice, but I can tell you that it's extremely important to write on an ongoing basis. Write, write, write. It's one of the reasons why I like writing on a monthly schedule so much. It forces me to keep going. I throw myself into the story, and then go back and fix all the typos and make sure the words flow properly. I have a few rules of thumb that I always try to hold myself to:

  1. In all things, glorify God. He is the reason I'm writing, and it's essential that I never forget that.

  2. Be as true to the moment as possible, no matter how hard or painful it may be.

  3. Don't force it. If I sit down to write, and nothing comes, then it means I wasn't prepared. Go do more research and spend time thinking it through. Writer's block is just another way of saying that I wasn't properly prepared. When I am, the words should come as a free flowing stream.

  4. Write with my heart. If I'm not ready and willing to empty myself into the story, then I might as well walk away. I shouldn't waste my time or anyone else's if I'm not willing to give it absolutely everything I've got.

  5. Just tell the story. When writing rules are bogging me down, and self doubt threaten to stall creativity, push it all aside and simply tell the story. back to top


Q: How do you write your dialogue? It's like it's real!

A: To me, it is real. I often wake up in the middle of the night, and find myself listening to the characters in my head, as they try to work out their differences. Sounds crazy, I know, but it happens. By the time I go to write the story, it's almost as if I'm simply putting down what I heard and saw in my imagination. back to top


Q: I love Jake from Abigail's Journey, and think it's great the way God sent Abby to help him. Because of this, I'm thinking about becoming penpals with someone behind bars. Should I?

A: Even though no one has asked me this question, I'd like to address it here. I would caution anyone becoming romantic penpals with someone behind bars. From the research I've done for this book, I've read of male prisoners soliciting women on the "outside" to be penpals, because the women felt sorry for them. Just because Jake is a sweetheart, doesn't necessarily mean that the majority of other prisoners are like that. I think this is best explained by one of my readers:

I've lived around some pretty "rough" people at times, even a few guys whose life was like Jake's... I've seen abused people become abusers and takers themselves. You have to be careful that you're not reacting out of emotion... I've been in a few situations where the worst thing I could do was to give them what they thought they needed... we have to be sensitive that in our interactions with others, we are being led by the Spirit. back to top


Q: Is it possible for you to write any faster?

A: Sorry, but one chapter a month for the Internet is all I have time for. back to top


Q: I just received a response to my feedback from someone named Sam. Who is he, and why is he answering your email?

A: Over the years, my readership has been growing and I'm finding that what used to work in the past, isn't working so well in the present. I'm reevaluating the way I handle things, so my health and creativity won't burn out.

One of my longtime readers joked that I would one day need a secretary to answer my fan mail, simply because I wouldn't have time to respond to everyone. She'll probably laugh now that it's finally happened! I appreciate readers' email, but I'm discovering that it's building pressure on me as a writer. So, I've decided it's finally time to let someone else handle my fan mail. That way, I can keep my attention on writing stories. My brother Sam has volunteered to handle feedback (thanks a bunch Sam!) and will make decisions on what comments get posted to the website. Besides my mom, Sam has been one of my biggest supporters, and he's more than qualified to answer questions and respond to feedback.

Words don't express how much I've appreciated the outpouring of support and encouragement I've received from those who read my stories. You guys are wonderful, and with God's help, I hope to continue long into the future!
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Q: What version of the Bible do you use for your Scripture verses?

A: I use the King James Version, or KJV. back to top


[Warning, the following Q&A contain one or two plot spoilers! If you haven't read Abigail's Journey yet, then stop here!]

Q: "My name is Rachel, and I live in Ontario. I love your online books... they are very encouraging... I have one question about the novel Abigail's Journey. I am a writer myself... My focus when I write is on romantic relationships and marriage, quite similar to what you write. I was wondering how you got the courage and what went through your mind when you decided to write about such personal issues such as rape and the aftermath of it in a marriage. Sex is a misunderstood and rarely discussed topic in many congregations, but I believe that many people, single and married, struggle with problems in the area of sexuality. I'm not married myself but with everything that is said about sex in society, more books like yours need to be written... the people in the body of Jesus Christ need to know that the topic of sex is not dirty or disgusting in itself-- it is the way in which it is used. Did you have any misgivings about sex being one of the main issues in this novel? I commend you for bringing such an an important issue into this novel, and even though Abby and Jake are fictitious characters, I'm certain that your book will help free many people from situations in this area of their lives." - Rachel (Toronto, Ontario, Canada)

A: Rachel, you asked some very thoughtful questions... You wondered how I got the courage to write what I do. Well, when I'm writing, I'm not aware of anyone else but me, God, and the characters in my story. Creating the story is a very private process-- that's why I don't discuss my stories with anyone before they're written. I just keep them hidden away in my heart, until it's time for them to come out.

What went through my mind to write about rape and the aftermath of it in a marriage? I'd have to say it came from where my research led me while I was finding out who Jake was. I knew that he had been tortured and abused as a small boy by his father, but as I researched more of our prison system in America, I began to realize that it would be unrealistic of me to say that the abuse stopped there. But, that's such an awful thing to deal with. Then I remembered something that I had learned while writing about the subject of Alzheimer's Disease in The Greatest of These: the good MUST be sweeter than the bad, or else it's going to be a rotten story. Enter Abigail. I already knew that she was a very self-possessed, confident young woman who had grown up in a stable, loving home. Her childhood was everything that Jake could only imagine. The more contrasts that the two leading characters had, the more I realized I wanted to tell their story. To leave out the effects of such a violent and painful past, when trying to go on with your future, seemed to be ignoring that elephant sitting in the room. I had to address the issues, and not run from them.

Really, the only time I had to be brave about something I wrote, was when Jake was raped again in prison. I literally held my breath to see how the readers would react. Because the good was sweeter than the bad, it was received better than I hoped.

I agree that sex is often a misunderstood subject in the Christian community, but I think it's because we don't know how to talk about it without fearing that we will be seen as indecent or immoral. When depicting an intimate relationship, always remember that it's essential to never go beyond the limits of what your conscience tells you is right. I don't care if it's in the name of being realistic, or not. Right is right and wrong is wrong. Understandably, each person's conscience will differ from another's, so the place where you draw the line will depend on you. That said, I think there's a lot of latitude for the Christian writer who is sensitive to the Holy Spirit's leading.

When we read, we get a mental image from the words that the writer chooses to use. A good example of this is in chapter 24, "Jake's Choice," where the entire chapter is about sex. (See the end of this email for what one reader said.) I purposefully mentioned in a few key scenes, what Jake and Abby were wearing, so that it wouldn't be left to the reader's imagination. I wanted to influence their mental picture as much as possible, and even came right out and asked the reader to stop at the bedroom door.

I also strive to depict characters on an emotional level, so that their motives and attraction to each other are not solely based on whether her skin is showing or not. Relationships are hard things, and it takes a lot of commitment and dedication to make them work. Just because it's a story, doesn't mean that everything magically works out-- unless you're writing a fairy tale, that is! Instead of running from or stepping around the hard and difficult, use them to your advantage. Problems are your chance to let the characters prove themselves and who they really are. There's a saying, "People are like tea bags: you don't know how strong they are, until they're in hot water." The same is so for the characters in your stories.

Did I have any misgivings about discussing sex? Sure I did, but when you keep the focus not so much on the sensual but on the emotional, I think you can say more than someone who just uses physical attraction. The bond can be deeper, and mean more. After all, what makes your heroine better than the woman standing next to her? Is it just because the light is glinting off her hair and that makes the hero fall madly in love with her? Or, was it because just minutes before, he heard her witness to a homeless woman and saw her compassion for others? You get the idea. What's in a person's heart is worth more than how they look.

Below is an excerpt from a reader (thanks, Narelle!) who had told me previously, that she had such a vivid imagination, she had trouble not letting it get into trouble. This is what she had to say about chapter 24:

"Oh, Judith, I just finished reading
chapter 24 of Abigail's Journey. Well done once again; but I am especially proud of the way you handled such a delicate chapter. To be able to draw us into the story-line with understanding and knowledge of Abby's and Jake's feelings and tumultuous, at times, emotions, without bordering on the indecent is a triumph in itself! I loved how, especially, you allowed the bedroom door to stay firmly shut to us, who had no right to cross the line on a married couple's intimacy. Too many writers are willing to cross that line simply because they know that their characters are not true people, with true feelings, and are willing to lead their readers into sin under this pretence. Thanks for still being an author that I am able to read without having to worry about what's around the corner, that spiritually, I know will cause me to have to walk away forever from a story and characters that I love."

That email meant a lot to me, and it's a great instance of how writers can control the story, so that it's safe to read-- even when the subject is sex.
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